Poorly worded sentence in initial activation email

[suicideguy]

"After verifying your account your website will be created and you will be able to login to your account and make changes via the administration panel."

Both Rene and I think that this sentence is rather poorly worded and needs to be revised.

My suggestion is to replace it with this:

"Your website will be created and you may login after verifying your account. You can also make changes via the administration panel."

[Arcade Boy]

grow up the CMSBox team know what are they doing go ahead change it if you can loser,and your the one that is poorly worded:"After verifying your account your website will be created and you will be able to login to your account and make changes via the administration panel."

i can't see whats wrong with this:"Your website will be created and you may login after verifying your account. You can also make changes via the administration panel."